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Проверьте, пожалуйста, важное письмо на английском! ! (НЕ школьное дз) и получил лучший ответ
Ответ от Expat[гуру]
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Thank you very much for your answer! (предложение начинается с большой буквы)
that there are sites like this also in Austria (порядок слов поменять и убрать или such или like this)
everything that you have listed (заменить слово)
I will move to Vienna in two years only (поменять слово. just имеет оттенок "только лишь", то есть "мало", а вы хотите сказать, что "два года" это много)
In summer, I have more than one month of vacation (some part of it is already occupied, apropos, by taking part in a seminar (убрать a bit, остальное - опционально)
In Moscow I'll have less time due to being very busy. - нелогичное предложение, в предыдущем вы говорили про лето, а тут вдруг начинаете про Москву
At the moment I'm not sure when I will be able to start exactly, but I can give an exact answer at the beginning of next week. (поменять время и предлог, переставить exactly)
I'd be very glad to become a part of this project and to make my contribution to it. (на мой взгляд лучше заменить слово member на другое)
Общее пожелание: попробуйте заменить все сокращения, типа i'll i'd на полные слова I will, I would и т. п.
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Dear Ms. ..
... I found your website by chance and was very glad to discover that there were several sites like this in Austria. I'm very interested in investigative journalism and consider helping people the second most important task of every (good) journalist.
I find your work to be very important not only for a certain person but for a society as a whole. I'm very interested in all journalistic positions that you offered and can do some journalistic job for you - everything that you have listed (making calls, doing interviews, researching, following leads, writing articles etc.) and translations into German as well. Also I can participate in coordination work and PR, because I have some experience in it, although now I'm in Moscow and I will move to Vienna in two years. Nevertheles I'm also ready work if you need some information from Moscow. ..
At the moment I'm not sure when I can start working, but I'll be able to give an exact answer in the beginning of next week. ..
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